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Daniel Steel's avatar

Truly the ultimate compliment. So glad you liked :) 😈 excited to share the next edition…

Daniel Steel's avatar

Yes probably, but only after the full length concludes :)

Tristan Hawke's avatar

That was hot! I had hunch when you made the announcement! 😈❤️😍

HornyCuban's avatar

I’ll be completely honest: pussy grosses me out. But your excellent writing made me at least want to be a voyeur of the action to come. Hopefully you’ll make me cum too!

Daniel Steel's avatar

That's what I was hoping for--appreciate your open mind. And you will have to share whether I hit the bullseye with the next chapter. xx

HornyCuban's avatar

Daniel, on a different subject altogether: I’m new to Substack and don’t know how to go to your archive looking for past stories you have written. Help is appreciated!

Daniel Steel's avatar

Just sent you a separate chat message.

Ry's avatar

Normally not into trans/straight sex, but as long as Tim is involved I think this is gonna be another winner

Daniel Steel's avatar

I’m not usually either… 😈 can’t wait to see what you think of the rest

Roman's avatar

Holy F 😲 bro, you the best, fo sho ❤️‍🔥

Polli 🏳️‍🌈👁️🏳️‍🌈's avatar

Yes! At last, something original and innovative from this corner of SS.

Daniel Steel's avatar

Thank you 😊😈💕 If you liked the start, you’ll like where this is headed

Roberta Mendoza's avatar

When does Daniel Steel not hit the make. Great hot read.

ELESCAR's avatar

Damn,the twist I never expected. This was hot! I sense a potential threesome with Tim 🤞

Daniel Steel's avatar

I think you might be right. Glad you liked it--trying out something a little different, and surprised myself by just how hot I found it...

Ben's avatar

That was incredible! You really have a way with writing erotically! So so hot!

Daniel Steel's avatar

Thank you kindly sir--appreciate you. Stay tuned for more...

Ben's avatar

Youve got me hooked!

Alan's avatar

Fuck that was a hot compelling read, different to. A good advert to join a gym lol.

VanderDad's avatar

Daniel.....This is a really powerful start to what I'm sure will be a most interesting series. So many themes to explore here. The obvious first trans attraction for the main character. The bromance with Tim that develops to a BroJob, that has some very real caring feelings underlying it. The desire for a 3-way with Tim and Ben that will be so hot, I'm sure. Tim as the master of eating pussy and the main character as the master of eating ass. I'll be curious to see if the 3-way leads to Tim being able to explore any of his other boundaries like sucking cock, or perhaps getting fucked? Can't wait to find out more about Ben's perspective and history as the series develops. Great start, Daniel!

Ate88's avatar

Wow! This was h o t! Thanks for writing this story. 🥵

Daniel Steel's avatar

Glad you enjoyed. Chapter two drops next week….

Polli 🏳️‍🌈👁️🏳️‍🌈's avatar

Will this become an ebook? If so will it be available on Amazon?

Robert Godwin's avatar

I have watched trans sex many times and found it very hot. Having been married to a female, I don't know if I could go back to that after all these years but never say never. I will say this will definitely be a good one. Tim was a good character to start things off!! This will be a great read!

Steven Rentschler's avatar

This one is just freaking HOT!❤️💯‼️💥🔥😈🥵