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Sarah Patterson's avatar

11% in and already earned a heart. This is 🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Thought I could finish this as a quick read before my next meeting, but uhmmm this is going to have to wait.

Daniel Steel's avatar

Sarah you are my angel ✨ stay tuned for tomorrow am :)

Sarah Patterson's avatar

Just finished and yeah you are soooooo wrong for this!!! Am I grateful I only have to wait until tomorrow...HELL YEAH!!!

But uhmmm yeah, you didn't have to leave us all proverbially hanging like THAT...Bryce included...to close out chapter 1. I would have shown up for chapter 2 just because this story is absolutely 😈🥵🥵🥵🔥🔥🔥!!! 🤣🤣🤣

See ya tomorrow!

VanderDad's avatar

Great storytelling partnered with the slow burn of the stroke by stroke description of the massage. Bryce clearly has more than the obvious physical tension to release. There's the emotional baggage he's carrying in terms of his relationship with his dad, and his fear of bottoming and being both emotionally and physically vulnerable. The reader, like Bryce, is also quickly drawn into the genuine intimacy Leo creates. Can't wait for Chapter 2.

Daniel Steel's avatar

Thanks Dad ;) Appreciate your insights as always. Keep an eye tomorrow for part II 😈

Kevin Bear7's avatar

Man! I need a massage!

Ry's avatar

More. Good Boy. I need to book a session with Leo ASAP. God damn your writing.

Prachit Shete's avatar

The tease in this chapter is too much! The end is just torture!! 🔥😈😍

Daniel Steel's avatar

Good thing you waited until the second chapter dropped… :)

Gemini Fox's avatar

I need a massage….

Alex Robertson's avatar

Love a good massage story…..great first chapter…

Daniel Steel's avatar

Thanks buddy 🤗

Steven Rentschler's avatar

Damn! Never thought I'd ever fantasize, sexually about a bodily injury!..But here we are!😜💯‼️💥🔥😈🥵

Daniel Steel's avatar

get ready for round two ;)

Steven Rentschler's avatar

😃❤️💯